- Don't be an egotist. Instead of "very good" you should be "good." And so on.
- Run it through spell check. Please. I beg of you.
- Make use of headings and sub-headings.
- Remember there's a bold and italics button.
- Add pictures! People love pictures! If the page is about you, just screenshot yourself and put it on.
- Add a category to it. At the bottom of the page you'll see "Categories." Find the matching category for your page (For example, People) and add it to your page.
- Don't call yourself a leader. That's for others to decide.